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There once was a girl who cried murder,
she did this everywhere she went.
Her eyes could only see demons,
Screaming was how her days were spent.

Now this little girl she loved starving,
and in secret she took every pill.
This little girl she loved dancing,
dancing drunk drinking herself ill.

The little girl who cried murder was lonely,
so depressed and so discontent.
Do not get this wrong people like her,
But all her happiness has been spent.

This little girl thinks she's ugly,
she would be beautiful if she were thin.
she's to tall and big she cries to be tiny,
Going pale with a blade to her skin.

Now the girl who cried murder lost love.
Now she wishes she never fell in.
She tries and tries to get over it,
but she can't for see look where her heart has been.

Evil and horrid and putrid,
And murder and rape pain and love,
And hatred and blood loss and fainting.
with no more faith no more hope in above.

This little girl though of death smiling.
Murder murder she was left with their screaming.
Only could think now of dieing
But in reality convinced shes still dreaming.

Insanity blessed with a curse
Don't kill her spirit with your pointless reality.
Immortal darling fearing death and still living
she continues her living fantasy and brutality.
. . .
I wrote this.
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swansisters Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love the nursery rhyme cadence.
EveDaniels Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much ! c:
i love the directionless direction of it all coincides...but its not so plain as to say "this is my point there is your throat lets make babies"
BluRequiem Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was wonderfully written! Amazing how emotions come together in words, and at times, even able to be truly felt~
EveDaniels Apr 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for all the comments (: and thank you! :D I seriously appreciate that!
BluRequiem Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're most welcome~ Just keep those poems coming! Love to read them ^^
EveDaniels Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I will :D I am going to start uploading more this week! :3
BluRequiem Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't wait! I'll try to ask questions too, so you'll be entertained with that, haha!
EveDaniels Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
well thank you (: haha
hattypatty118 Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you have a way with words ^^
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