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I'm tired and I'm a basket case of pity.
Don't look at me.
Don't talk at me.
You can't see me.


I want to close my eyes and invade in my inner city.
Don't dare wake me.
Please hold onto me…
No… you can't see me.


Yes you do see me…
I'm so blind that I'm chaotic.
Wake me! Embrace me! Please!
Can you really see me?


I do want to go to bed.
I'm so weary…
Hold me please…
Notice me…


No.
You can't see me…
Don't mock me…
Please help me…


I won't be able to speak of logic.
I am emotional.
I can't feel me.
I can't hear me.


Please…
Look at me…
Don't fret, and just hold me.
Please… even though… we can't see me.
Not my best... It's 1 am.. I'm tired... I had some inspiration
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LoneWolf127 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Woooooowwwwww...That was...Amazing...I read it the first time and was just like shocked...Then i read it again xD
Great job Eve!
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EveDaniels Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you so much!! c:
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destandnikkii Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty awesome for being tired :floating:
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EveDaniels Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you :3
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