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February 24, 2013
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Jealousy overtakes me
To the point where I can’t breathe
But I don’t want to breathe
Save me

I’m filled with hate
And I don’t want to be
But I am
And it helps me breathe.

My love is the fuel
To this fire
And for the sake of love
Get me to see the truth

I know the truth
But I can’t think
Only feel
Emotions never cared about logic

Help me
I scream to myself
It has to be me
No one else can help me

I’m stuck in denial
Like a paradox
Now I think I’m okay
But I’m not.

Why can’t I see what you mean?
Why can’t I hear your words?
Why can’t I believe?
Open my eyes…

Make me breathe
In your words
And forget my own
I say to myself.
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Mysterygirl98 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Wow... I can't relate to this but a lot of my friends can. And even though I can't relate this really sticks out. It's beautiful and well written. You're a brilliant writer, and I wish the very best of luck to you in your future as a profetional writer :)
ShadowZerro2 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
While I see your displacement of self to express your logical thoughts to your emotional self, it feels like something is missing. Though I do like the poem. I can relate completely.
Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013   Writer
Great job I love your use of strong imagery! :)
NintendoNekoo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   Digital Artist
You've become so popular o.o ugh I love you. don't forget the little people. ;w;
EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
well I don't know about the little people but I never could forget my best friend cx and shhh just this one poem like went bigger than my others for some reason cx
NintendoNekoo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013   Digital Artist
and ;w; <3
EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
like you c; ammazing girl!
Hyles Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Angsty teens. Angsty teens, everywhere.
EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I found one. c:
EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Ohh no no no! I meant I found the emoticon for angsty. In the first comment I left to your comment I said, "I tried to find an emoticon for angst. I did not, but the entire rage section had it down haha. c:" but then I did find an angst emoticon so I sent another comment saying I found one. Not trying to imply you are an angsty teen c:
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