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Jealousy overtakes me
To the point where I can’t breathe
But I don’t want to breathe
Save me

I’m filled with hate
And I don’t want to be
But I am
And it helps me breathe.

My love is the fuel
To this fire
And for the sake of love
Get me to see the truth

I know the truth
But I can’t think
Only feel
Emotions never cared about logic

Help me
I scream to myself
It has to be me
No one else can help me

I’m stuck in denial
Like a paradox
Now I think I’m okay
But I’m not.

Why can’t I see what you mean?
Why can’t I hear your words?
Why can’t I believe?
Open my eyes…

Make me breathe
In your words
And forget my own
I say to myself.
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Mysterygirl98 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Wow... I can't relate to this but a lot of my friends can. And even though I can't relate this really sticks out. It's beautiful and well written. You're a brilliant writer, and I wish the very best of luck to you in your future as a profetional writer :)
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ShadowZerro2 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
While I see your displacement of self to express your logical thoughts to your emotional self, it feels like something is missing. Though I do like the poem. I can relate completely.
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013   Writer
Great job I love your use of strong imagery! :)
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NintendoNekoo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   Digital Artist
You've become so popular o.o ugh I love you. don't forget the little people. ;w;
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EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
well I don't know about the little people but I never could forget my best friend cx and shhh just this one poem like went bigger than my others for some reason cx
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NintendoNekoo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013   Digital Artist
BECAUSE IT'S AMAZZZINGGGGGGGGG
and ;w; <3
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EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
like you c; ammazing girl!
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Hyles Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Angsty teens. Angsty teens, everywhere.
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EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I found one. c:
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EveDaniels Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Ohh no no no! I meant I found the emoticon for angsty. In the first comment I left to your comment I said, "I tried to find an emoticon for angst. I did not, but the entire rage section had it down haha. c:" but then I did find an angst emoticon so I sent another comment saying I found one. Not trying to imply you are an angsty teen c:
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